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Some people think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre school age. Other working people think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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There are split opinion regarding baby
care
 centres are better option for providing an appropriate services to children. Whereas,
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 group of people support grandparents would better carers for their babies. Both views has its own pros and cons. I
,
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,
however believe
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however, believe
 that
child
care
 centred services are good for children in the age group of 3 to 5 years. Because of the management and the whole staff members are trained and large number of equipments
also
 available there for looking after the children. Examine the former
decivsion
the act of making up your mind about something
decision
, the primary arguments would put forward is for children's better
care
 only baby
care
 centres are suitable to keep
thenm
objective case of they
them
then
 safe and for nurturing.
This
 is because their way of dealing the problem related to
children
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child
children's
child's
 health
are
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is
 valuable and all of them
have professional degree
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have a professional degree
 level.
Also
, they are educated and give preference to cleanliness.
On the contrary
, the latter view suggests that family members can take better
care
 for their children. They believe that “Blood is thicker than blood”. By
this
, they mean
child
care
 centres have not the feelings of
belongingness
. Beside
this
,
child
care
 centre's nurses beat kids when they are in anger. To conclude and give my opinion, I would say that
child
care
 centre's are good for giving a
services
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service
 to children of pre
age school
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school age
. Because they have all the
qualification
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qualifications
 and values
.
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.
 So
this
 is an appropriate way to deal with
this
 situation.

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