The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
pie
charts give information about how many journal
articles
are read per week by all
students
,
PhD
students
and junior
lecturers
at an Australian university.
Overall
,
PhD
students
read the most journal
articles
in
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compared with all
students
and junior
lecturers
.
In contrast
, it can be seen that all
students
read the least journal
articles
.
Besides
, most of all
students
read the least, at about 1 to 5 units of journal
articles
and
accounts
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accounting
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for 67% of the total.
According to
the
pie
charts, 21% of all
students
read 6 to 11 journal
articles
while
all
students
who read 12 journal
articles
and above make up 12% of the
pie
chart.
In contrast
,
PhD
students
who read 12 journal
articles
and above comprised 3 quarters of the
pie
chart and accounts for 80%.
In contrast
, 24% of junior
lecturers
read 12 journal
articles
and above. Whereby,
PhD
students
who read 6 to 11 units make up 15% of the total.
Likewise
, the smallest sector comprises of
PhD
students
and junior
students
who read 1 to 5 journal
articles
accounts
Wrong verb form
accounting
show examples
for 5% and 1% respectively. Junior
lecturers
who read 6 to 11 journal
articles
is
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are
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almost a quarter of the
pie
chart at 24%.
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