The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The

pie

charts give information about how many journal

articles

are read per week by all

students

PhD

students

and junior

lecturers

at an Australian university.

Overall

PhD

students

read the most journal

articles

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compared with all

students

and junior

lecturers

In contrast

, it can be seen that all

students

read the least journal

articles

Besides

, most of all

students

read the least, at about 1 to 5 units of journal

articles

and

accounts

Wrong verb form

accounting

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for 67% of the total.

According to

the

pie

charts, 21% of all

students

read 6 to 11 journal

articles

while

all

students

who read 12 journal

articles

and above make up 12% of the

pie

chart.

In contrast

PhD

students

who read 12 journal

articles

and above comprised 3 quarters of the

pie

chart and accounts for 80%.

In contrast

, 24% of junior

lecturers

read 12 journal

articles

and above. Whereby,

PhD

students

who read 6 to 11 units make up 15% of the total.

Likewise

, the smallest sector comprises of

PhD

students

and junior

students

who read 1 to 5 journal

articles

accounts

Wrong verb form

accounting

show examples

for 5% and 1% respectively. Junior

lecturers

who read 6 to 11 journal

articles

Correct subject-verb agreement

are

show examples

almost a quarter of the

pie

chart at 24%.

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4 paragraphs

204 words

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Clear and correct grammar

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