The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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charts give information about how many journal

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are read per week by all

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PhD

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and junior

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at an Australian university.

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read the most journal

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compared with all

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read the least journal

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read the least, at about 1 to 5 units of journal

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for 67% of the total.

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read 6 to 11 journal

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all

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who read 12 journal

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and above make up 12% of the

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and above comprised 3 quarters of the

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chart and accounts for 80%.

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, 24% of junior

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read 12 journal

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and above. Whereby,

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who read 6 to 11 units make up 15% of the total.

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who read 1 to 5 journal

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almost a quarter of the

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 79%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words pie, articles, students, phd, lecturers with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

204 words

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