Some universities offer online courses for students. Do you think this is a positive or negative development for students?

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Nowadays
, universities providing various distance learning courses for students to improve their skills which boost their career growth.
However
, there are both pros and cons to do
this
. I will discuss some
positve
characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.
positive
thing of distance or online courses and some of the challenges to be overcome. Let's begin with the
first
advantage of e-learning education offered by some educational institution. One of the main positives of the online learning is time saving and cost effective for many pupils. What I mean by
this
is that most of the people enrolled them for online
course
because of their strict time management they
dont
do not
don't
have free time to study on
regular basis
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a regular basis
.
For Example
, people who are working in
organization
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an organization
the organization
will engage in online education to expertise
thier
of them or themselves
their
proficiency.
This
can make them to get
job promotion
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a job promotion
or advancement.
Secondly
,
correspondance
communication by the exchange of letters
correspondence
education helps most of the economically
unwealthy
not in or exhibiting good health in body or mind
unhealthy
unworthy
people who
can not
can not
cannot
able to continue regular class could able to register to the
course
.
For instance
, people who are suffering for money they could admit themselves in the
unviersity
the body of faculty and students at a university
university
and can start the
course
with
lesser
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a lesser course fee
course
fee comparing to
fulltime
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full time
courses,
although
they can go to work to bring up their family in the society.
This
leads to flourish their lives and skills.
In
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On
the other side of the argument, mostly people
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrol
to
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in
courses for advance their skills. But, some of the reputed organizations are not accepting the courses because they
beilieve
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
that, pupils who
are pursued
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have pursued
online
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an online course
course
might
lacked
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lack
in strong
knowlegde
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
in the respective domain.
This
leads, more Reluctant to the students to
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrol
them in the courses. To conclude,
although
most of the people are ready to join the online
course
, due the lack of the opportunity, they
showing
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show
are showing
some reluctance to
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrol
in the courses. I believe that organizations should test the student's knowledge and provide a better
opportunities
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opportunity
to
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for
the skilled persons the way forward.
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