Some universities offer online courses for students. Do you think this is a positive or negative development for students?

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Nowdays

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Nowadays

, universities providing various distance learning courses for students to improve their skills which boost their career growth.

However

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, there are both pros and cons to do

this

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. I will discuss some

positve

characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.

positive

thing of distance or online courses and some of the challenges to be overcome. Let's begin with the

first

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advantage of e-learning education offered by some educational institution. One of the main positives of the online learning is time saving and cost effective for many pupils. What I mean by

this

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is that most of the people enrolled them for online

course

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because of their strict time management they

dont

do not

don't

have free time to study on

regular basis

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a regular basis

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, people who are working in

organization

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an organization

the organization

will engage in online education to expertise

thier

of them or themselves

their

proficiency.

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can make them to get

job promotion

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a job promotion

or advancement.

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correspondance

communication by the exchange of letters

correspondence

education helps most of the economically

unwealthy

not in or exhibiting good health in body or mind

unhealthy

unworthy

people who

can not

cannot

able to continue regular class could able to register to the

course

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, people who are suffering for money they could admit themselves in the

unviersity

the body of faculty and students at a university

university

and can start the

course

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with

lesser

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a lesser course fee

course

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fee comparing to

fulltime

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full time

courses,

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they can go to work to bring up their family in the society.

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leads to flourish their lives and skills.

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the other side of the argument, mostly people

enroll

enrol

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courses for advance their skills. But, some of the reputed organizations are not accepting the courses because they

beilieve

accept as true; take to be true

believe

believed

that, pupils who

are pursued

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have pursued

online

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an online course

course

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might

lacked

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lack

in strong

knowlegde

the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning

knowledge

in the respective domain.

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leads, more Reluctant to the students to

enroll

enrol

them in the courses. To conclude,

although

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most of the people are ready to join the online

course

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, due the lack of the opportunity, they

showing

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show

are showing

some reluctance to

enroll

enrol

in the courses. I believe that organizations should test the student's knowledge and provide a better

opportunities

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opportunity

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for

the skilled persons the way forward.

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