The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph provides information about the
utilization
of
fish
and different kinds of meat in a European country from 1979 to 2004. Overall, it is clear that the most popular kind of meat was chicken, the least popular one was the
fish
.
In addition
, the
consumption
of
beef
and
lamb
decreased dramatically. In 1979, the
consumption
of
beef
and
lamb
were about the same, with
lamb
higher of 10 grams. Over a ten-year period between 1979 and 1989,
beef
utilization
fluctuated considerably, and there was a sharp increase in the
consumption
of chicken by 60 grams. During the same period, there was a rapid drop in the
utilization
of
lamb
to 100g, while the figure for
fish
declined slightly to 50g. Between 1989 and 2004, the
consumption
of
lamb
and
fish
continued to decrease to 50 grams and 40 grams respectively, and the
utilization
of chicken reached its peak 240 grams. There was a significant drop in
beef
consumption
, with a decrease of over 70 grams in just 10 years from 1994 to 2004.
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