The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph provides information about the
utilization
of fish
and different kinds of meat in a European country from 1979 to 2004.
Overall
, it is clear that
the most popular kind of meat was chicken, the
least popular one was Correct word choice
and the
the
Correct article usage
apply
fish
. In addition
, the consumption
of beef
and lamb
decreased dramatically.
In 1979, the consumption
of beef
and lamb
were
about the same, with Correct subject-verb agreement
was
lamb
higher of
10 Change preposition
by
grams
. Over a ten-year period between 1979 and 1989, beef
utilization
fluctuated considerably, and there was a sharp increase in the consumption
of chicken by 60 grams
. During the same period, there was a rapid drop in the utilization
of lamb
to 100g, while
the figure for fish
declined slightly to 50g.
Between 1989 and 2004, the consumption
of lamb
and fish
continued to decrease to 50 grams
and 40 grams
respectively, and the utilization
of chicken reached its peak 240
Change preposition
of 240
grams
. There was a significant drop in beef
consumption
, with a decrease of over 70 grams
in just 10 years from 1994 to 2004.Submitted by nguyennhancrazy on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words utilization, fish, consumption, beef, lamb, grams with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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