The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph provides information about the
utilization
of
fish
and different kinds of meat in a European country from 1979 to 2004.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the most popular kind of meat was chicken,
the
Correct word choice
and the
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least popular one was
the
Correct article usage
apply
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fish
.
In addition
, the
consumption
of
beef
and
lamb
decreased dramatically. In 1979, the
consumption
of
beef
and
lamb
were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
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about the same, with
lamb
higher
of
Change preposition
by
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10
grams
. Over a ten-year period between 1979 and 1989,
beef
utilization
fluctuated considerably, and there was a sharp increase in the
consumption
of chicken by 60
grams
. During the same period, there was a rapid drop in the
utilization
of
lamb
to 100g,
while
the figure for
fish
declined slightly to 50g. Between 1989 and 2004, the
consumption
of
lamb
and
fish
continued to decrease to 50
grams
and 40
grams
respectively, and the
utilization
of chicken reached its peak
240
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of 240
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grams
. There was a significant drop in
beef
consumption
, with a decrease of over 70
grams
in just 10 years from 1994 to 2004.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words utilization, fish, consumption, beef, lamb, grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption trends
  • steady increase
  • most consumed meat
  • relatively stable
  • general decline
  • pronounced decline
  • over the years
  • throughout the period
  • depicts
  • span
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