The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph provides information about the
utilization
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of
fish
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and different kinds of meat in a European country from 1979 to 2004.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the most popular kind of meat was chicken,
the
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and the
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least popular one was
the
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apply
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fish
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.
In addition
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, the
consumption
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of
beef
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and
lamb
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decreased dramatically. In 1979, the
consumption
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of
beef
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and
lamb
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were
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was
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about the same, with
lamb
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higher
of
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by
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10
grams
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. Over a ten-year period between 1979 and 1989,
beef
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utilization
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fluctuated considerably, and there was a sharp increase in the
consumption
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of chicken by 60
grams
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. During the same period, there was a rapid drop in the
utilization
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of
lamb
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to 100g,
while
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the figure for
fish
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declined slightly to 50g. Between 1989 and 2004, the
consumption
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of
lamb
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and
fish
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continued to decrease to 50
grams
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and 40
grams
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respectively, and the
utilization
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of chicken reached its peak
240
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of 240
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grams
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. There was a significant drop in
beef
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consumption
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, with a decrease of over 70
grams
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in just 10 years from 1994 to 2004.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words utilization, fish, consumption, beef, lamb, grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption trends
  • steady increase
  • most consumed meat
  • relatively stable
  • general decline
  • pronounced decline
  • over the years
  • throughout the period
  • depicts
  • span
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