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The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion mil be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.

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There is no doubt, that the basic idea of having a single career
is become
Suggestion
has become
becomes
 an old fashioned
one
. Nowadays, more and more people want to have not at least
one
 profession and different ways of earning money. They claim that education is the only thing that will
continues
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continue
 throughout our lives. It is generally agreed today, that people want to have more than
one
 specialization, while at the past
this
 modern trend was unacceptable.
One
 argument in support of having several careers consists in the education and knowledge. In
modern world
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the modern world
, most schools and universities starting to decline lessons that are not
stand
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standing
 up for the human future profession.
For instance
, if a man
want
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wants
 to be a doctor,
than
subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)
then
 it means that he need to know biology, chemistry, science and
etc
studies intended to provide general knowledge and intellectual skills (rather than occupational or professional skills)
arts
, while subjects like history, math, and others will be
not helpful and useful
Suggestion
helpful and not useful
 for him at all. I
dont
do not
don't
 agree with
this
 statement, that schools should remove unnecessary subjects because they will help us
in
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with
 basic things.
For example
, to count money, to know the time and so on. As for,
history we
Accept comma addition
history, we
 need to know
what
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what's
 what in the past, that the price for
leaving
the experience of being alive; the course of human events and activities
living
 in a piece is very high. It is
well-known fact
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a well-known fact
, that having a several careers very hard.
Nevertheless
, you need to have a lot of passion, force, power and endurance. In conclusion, to sum up, I think that having more than
one
 work is a good idea,
also
 it is very well paid direction of living standards.
Moreover
, it will be particularly better
of
from a particular thing or place or position
off
 each of the job will deliver you only happiness.
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