The environment we live in is in danger due to various problems. What are the underlying causes? Who is responsible to combat this? What measures

Pollution becomes a major concern in the
society
all over the world. In the
society
not only an individual, but
also
groups of people live. In the
society
it is everyone’s
responsibility
to protect the
environment
. Environmental problems caused by pollution,
for
example fuel
Accept comma addition
example, fuel
gases, cutting of trees,
gases
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the gases
released by factories.
Government
should take
responsibility
to reduce pollution in order to protect the
environment
.  Every individual who is
leaving
the experience of being alive; the course of human events and activities
living
in the
society
should take
responsibility
to participate to protect
environment
.
Firstly
, people should grow trees at their houses, premisses and colonies. By growing trees there are huge advantages,
for
example most
Accept comma addition
example, most
of the polluted gases took over by
tress
a tall perennial woody plant having a main trunk and branches forming a distinct elevated crown; includes both gymnosperms and angiosperms
trees
and they release the oxygen. Everyone should not throw the wastages on the roads, maintain
healthy
Suggestion
a healthy environment
environment
by using the dustbins.  At the same time if we consider the
government
’s role:
government
have
Suggestion
has
authority to protect
environment
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the environment
. By planting the
tress
a tall perennial woody plant having a main trunk and branches forming a distinct elevated crown; includes both gymnosperms and angiosperms
trees
all over the places,
for
example all
Accept comma addition
example, all
government
places,
besides
the roads, schools, and parks etc., what I know
this
type of programme called clean and green
environment
.
Thus
the pollution can be controlled.  Cleanliness is very important to maintain
environment
healthy,
hence
government
Suggestion
the government
should
emphasis
Suggestion
emphasize
the cleaners to clean the area
thouly
in an exhaustive manner
thoroughly
. Should place the dustbin every
streets
Suggestion
street
and educate the individuals by advertisements. Inspect the houses every month to check how the individuals maintain their house, so that the individuals reflect themselves and self-correct themselves. Conduct environmental talks in the school, that individual
learns
Suggestion
learn
everything from childhood
on-wards
in a forward direction
onwards
onward
in the school.  I believed that it is every individual’s
responsibility
to solve the environmental problems,
however
impossible for only one individual in the
society
. So that
government
should take actions to solve the environmental problems, but
encourage
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encourages
every individual to
takes
Suggestion
take
part all those
Suggestion
part in all those
activities
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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