The environment we live in is in danger due to various problems. What are the underlying causes? Who is responsible to combat this? What measures

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Pollution becomes a major concern in the

society

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all over the world. In the

society

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not only an individual, but

also

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groups of people live. In the

society

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it is everyone’s

responsibility

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to protect the

environment

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. Environmental problems caused by pollution,

for

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example fuel

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example, fuel

gases, cutting of trees,

gases

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the gases

released by factories.

Government

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should take

responsibility

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to reduce pollution in order to protect the

environment

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. Every individual who is

leaving

the experience of being alive; the course of human events and activities

living

in the

society

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should take

responsibility

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to participate to protect

environment

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Firstly

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, people should grow trees at their houses, premisses and colonies. By growing trees there are huge advantages,

for

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example most

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example, most

of the polluted gases took over by

tress

a tall perennial woody plant having a main trunk and branches forming a distinct elevated crown; includes both gymnosperms and angiosperms

trees

and they release the oxygen. Everyone should not throw the wastages on the roads, maintain

healthy

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a healthy environment

environment

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by using the dustbins. At the same time if we consider the

government

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’s role:

government

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have

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has

authority to protect

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environment

Suggestion

the environment

. By planting the

tress

a tall perennial woody plant having a main trunk and branches forming a distinct elevated crown; includes both gymnosperms and angiosperms

trees

all over the places,

for

Linking Words

example all

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example, all

government

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places,

besides

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the roads, schools, and parks etc., what I know

this

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type of programme called clean and green

environment

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Thus

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the pollution can be controlled. Cleanliness is very important to maintain

environment

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healthy,

hence

Linking Words

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government

Suggestion

the government

should

emphasis

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emphasize

the cleaners to clean the area

thouly

in an exhaustive manner

thoroughly

. Should place the dustbin every

streets

Suggestion

street

and educate the individuals by advertisements. Inspect the houses every month to check how the individuals maintain their house, so that the individuals reflect themselves and self-correct themselves. Conduct environmental talks in the school, that individual

learns

Suggestion

learn

everything from childhood

on-wards

in a forward direction

onwards

onward

in the school. I believed that it is every individual’s

responsibility

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to solve the environmental problems,

however

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impossible for only one individual in the

society

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. So that

government

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should take actions to solve the environmental problems, but

encourage

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encourages

every individual to

takes

Suggestion

take

part all those

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part in all those

activities

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

297 words

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The environment we live in is in danger due to various problems. What are the underlying causes? Who is responsible to combat this? What measures

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some children spend a long time each day on their smartphones. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?

More people today put their personal and private information online (address, telephone number, credit card number) to do everyday activities such as banking, shopping, and socializing. Is this a positive or negative development?

Now a days, many families are rarely having meals together. Why is this happening? Is this a positive or a negative development.

Some educationalists think that international exchange visits will benefit teenagers at the school. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?