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The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern life style. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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The popularity of ready-made foods has helped individuals to keep up with the pace of modern lifestyle. In
this
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 21st century, most people do two or three jobs involving a lot of man hours with little break
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 to eat
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. To meet up with
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 modern life work demand, fast
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 is preferred to the stress of making home-made foods.
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 creates more
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 for other things and gives ample
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 that could be used for other things like leisure.
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, maintaining
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 trend can be costly and over
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 could expose one to unhealthy eating habit. In my opinion, I think the disadvantages of fast foods outweighs the
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 it gives to its consumers.
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, sustaining
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food
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 lifestyle could be expensive. Most people spend twice the amount used to prepare a home-made
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 that would
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 for a week in a couple of days.
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 cost could vary based on the content of the package. A Prepacked rice, protein, salad and a bottle of water would cost much more than a Prepacked rice only.
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, ready-made foods can be a risk factor to obesity and cardiac diseases. A lot of fast
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 is made up of carbohydrate, fats and oil.
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 makes most
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 diets unbalanced, sometimes insatiable and may be consumed in large quantities. For individuals with a sedentary lifestyle, the impact on health will be more and could lead to cardiac arrest and death.
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, I think the negative consequences of fast foods on human health are far more detrimental to be overlooked.
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, I strongly recommend the practice of
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 dieting should be moderated or completely avoided.
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