some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Technology has come a long way,
although
we don't have flying cars just yet, but today's smartphones and tablets are an all-in-one. One can enjoy their favourite movie on their phones or tablets sitting at home or anywhere for that matter. On one hand, some people claim that the need to go to the
cinema
to see films no longer exists and that they can pretty much watch their desired movies anywhere they like at any given time they wish. These people argue that
this
way is better due to the fact that it's saves time and money, allows multi-tasking and overall more convenient.
On the other hand
, others say that going to the
cinema
is a must in order to wholly enjoy the film. As it provides a more of natural habitat for movies. Just like the old times, watching a film in the
cinema
was the norm. With today's standards,
smarthphones
and tablets made people
emprisoned
being in captivity
imprisoned
to technology and limited human interactions. I personally try to go to the
cinema
as much as possible as it makes the movie more pleasurable for me. Of course I do end up watching most of the films at home in my
tablet but
Accept comma addition
tablet, but
nontheless
despite anything to the contrary (usually following a concession)
nonetheless
, I
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
cinemas are the best choice for movies.
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  • Convenience
  • Mobile Viewing
  • Cost-efficient
  • Time-efficient
  • Personalized experience
  • Immersive
  • Cinematic experience
  • Surround sound
  • Collective experience
  • Technical superiority
  • Sensory experience
  • Social hubs
  • Cultural events
  • Distractions
  • Preservation
  • Filmmaking art
  • Cinematographic nuances
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