The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph shows the number of university

graduates

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in Canada between the

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year

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1992 to 2006. The comparison is between both male and female

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. In 1992, there were 70,000 males was graduated,

whereas

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female graduate strength was around 100000. There was a steady growth in male

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till 1995 and its fall till 1998.

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, there was a little bump between

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the year

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year

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years

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1999 and 2000. After 2000

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the

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number of male people gradually increased and

during

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2006 there

was

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were

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more than 90000

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graduated

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. In female

graduation

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there was a slight up till 1995 and it fell till 1998.

subsequently

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from

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1998

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there was a huge increase in numbers. It was around 100,000 female

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in the

year

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1998 and it grows towards 150,000

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in the

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2006. In comparison, there were more female than male university

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the

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Canada.

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, it will be good for the country's economy if females were educated.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

157 words

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general trend
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economic conditions
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