The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph shows the number of university
graduates
in Canada between the year
1992 to 2006. The comparison is between both male and female Fix the agreement mistake
years
graduates
.
In 1992, there were 70,000 males was graduated, whereas
female graduate strength was around 100000. There was a steady growth in male graduates
till 1995 and its fall till 1998. However
, there was a little bump between Change the article
the year
year
1999 and 2000. After 2000 Fix the agreement mistake
years
a
number of male people gradually increased and Correct article usage
the
during
2006 there Change preposition
in
was
more than 90000 Correct subject-verb agreement
were
were
Unnecessary verb
apply
graduated
.
In female Replace the word
graduates
graduation
there was a slight up till 1995 and it fell till 1998. Add a comma
,graduation
subsequently
from the
Change the article
apply
1998
there was a huge increase in numbers. It was around 100,000 female Add a comma
,1998
graduates
in the year
1998 and it grows towards 150,000 graduates
in the year
2006.
In comparison, there were more female than male university graduates
in the
Canada. Correct article usage
apply
Moreover
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