Housing is essential for people. Some people argue that the government should offer free housing for peope who cannot afford it. Do you agree or disagree?

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In most developed and under
developrd
being changed over time so as to be e.g. stronger or more complete or more useful
developed
countries, homelessness is a major
problem
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. Some people
beleive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
that the government should provide free
accomodations
making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances
accommodation
to
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for
the poor
.
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.
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
do not agree with
this
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opinion and
also
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do not believe
this
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opinion can
slve
find the solution to (a problem or question) or understand the meaning of
solve
the
problem
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of housing in these countries. In countries where there are different programmes set in motion to ease off the effect of poverty on the people, provision of free shelter
to
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for
people may not be feasible.
For instance
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, many governments have invested in providing free education and health care to people, providing free housing might be completely impossible.
However
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, if the authorities can make available low cost houses where the masses will only need to pay a small amount
of of
connects a noun with the preceding word
of
money for, the level of homelessness might be reduced to its barest minimum.
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, if little or taxes can be placed on houses or land for the poor, many people will be able to afford houses,
In addition
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, lands can be made available to the landless to be used to build small apartments they can afford to maintain. Another way of combating
housing
Suggestion
the housing problem
problem
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is to reduce the prices of building materials which will
consequently
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lead to the constructions of houses with little money. Housing loans should
also
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be made available to the people to enable them
build
Suggestion
to build
and pay back conveniently In conclusion,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
do not think providing free housing to all poor in the
soirty
a large and densely populated urban area; may include several independent administrative districts
city
story
is
attainable but
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attainable, but
the government could apply other measures as stated to solve the
problem
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of homelessness and help reduce the effect of poverty on the masses.
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