The majority of news being reported is bad news such as wars, famines, accidents and crime. Why do you think that is? Do you think the news should be a balance of both good and bad news?

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In
modern era
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the modern era
, Media has acquired a big place in the business market. Some people feel that most of the news reports are negative in nature and consists of information about
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the draught
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ponder upon whether there should be
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an equal amount
equal amounts
of positive and negative reports.
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with, it is often said that people are easily drawn towards negativity and the large media companies plays on
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emotion of the common public to attract more
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unacceptable, but
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draws
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the most amount
most amount
of income for the media houses.
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- If a large bank has been
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take something away by force or without the consent of the owner
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, the media coverage about
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entire incident with minute to minute news update on the national television will increase the TRP of the channel and
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, more money. If every news channel telecasts only the crime news
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what about the happening news? Who will cover them? In
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world of chaos people want some amount of positivity and hope in their life. Since, happiness and positive thought are very important in one’s life the news channels can play an important role in promoting
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by covering and telecasting good news.
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- If an event related to food and cuisines is organized
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covering the entire event and advertising about it will both attract the general public to the festival and
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increase the
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of the channel.
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, it will be win-win situation for both.
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, it is very important to telecast both happening and depressing news in the news channels.
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, to conclude
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essay not only discussed the reasons why the news and media channels relay crime
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news, but
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why they should telecast happy news too. As hope and awareness are very important for everyone media should contribute their fair share in achieving
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