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As countries have developed there have been a trend towards smaller family sizes. Why does this happen? How does this affect the society.

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Due to the development of countries, there is a reduction in the size of the family unit.
This
 essay will discuss the reasons for
this
 phenomenon and examine some of the possible effects it will have on society.
To begin
 with, One of the principal reasons for smaller family units is birth control.
This
 is because as a country develops, there is a rise in the number of medical clinics
hence
, there would be an increase in distribution of free contraception,
therefore
 the result of
this
 is that people can choose family scope.
For instance
, a survey carried out in an area of Akwa Ibom state showed that several families use birth control methods to plan their family capacity.
Also
, Another important factor is the rise in the levels of education that occur as a country develops, which means that women are more educated and more likely to be working.
Consequently
, many will want to delay having children and so will likely have fewer in the long-term. To illustrate, a fertility survey done amongst literate and illiterate women proved that the educated women bore less children as compared to the non educated.
However
, there are positives and negative impacts on the society. A positive effect is that the population will fall, which will likely result in less poverty as there will be less competition for scarce resources.
For example
, parents can provide better education for their children as it will cost less and benefit humanity as a whole.
Although
, a negative impact is that there will be fewer younger people in the workforce in the future,
thus
 making the sustainability of future economic growth less certain.
For instance
, a study conducted in Ministry of works in Southern part of Nigeria showed that several employees have retired due to old-age, but there are limited youths to join the work force. In conclusion, family capacity has fallen due to birth control and education, and
this
 can have a positive and negative impact on the population.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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