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The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peae. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

#threat #weapons #world #peae #power #energy #technology
Technology
make
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makes
has made
 things easier as well as threat for human being and nature. After the invention of nuclear weapons and nuclear
power
 in the technical sector. There are lots of advantages and disadvantages of nuclear energy and nuclear weapons. In my opinion, I
am partially agree
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partially agree
 because nuclear
power
 is dangerous for human and nature’s health.  Let’s talk about
benefits
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the benefits
 of nuclear energy.
Firstly
, it helps to create electricity for the big cities. Nuclear plants use polluted water for producing the electricity
as a
result it
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result, it
 purifies the
water which
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water, which
 we can use for household consumption. In most of the big
cities
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city's
city
 nuclear
power
 plants provide electricity with a very low cost of bills and it is affordable for every single household. All the nations keep nuclear weapons just to maintain the peace with their
neighbor
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neighbour
neighbours
 nations.
On the other hand
, it is harmful for the environment and living beings. The radiation comes from the nuclear
power
 plant can cause skin cancer to human beings and birds are loosing

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