with an increasing population communicating via the internet and text messaging, face to face conversation will be a thing of the past. To what extant do you agree

people
Suggestion
People
had communicated with each other
face
to
face
in the
past but
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past, but
now people structured with the busy working scenario,
moreover they
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moreover, they
get practice to communicate with the
internet
such
as email,
skype
Suggestion
Skype
, video calls,
watsup
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wats' up
wats up
waits up
watts up
etc.. , while they do not have
chance
Suggestion
a chance
the chance
to meet each other. I totally agree with
this
statement. There are compelling reasons
for agreeing
Suggestion
for agreeing to this
this
statement.
Firstly due
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Firstly, due
to the development I the information and
communication
technology, the increasing number of people
prefer
Suggestion
prefers
to
contact
each other through modern tools.
For example
, people for the sake of work, education purpose moving to a different region and countries far away from their place,
therefore
, they
can not
can not
cannot
communicate
face
to
face
with their family, spouse, friends at all, while they are in
contact
through a video
calls
Suggestion
call
and
skype which
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Skype, which
Skype which
is really helpful to the long-distance relationship
moreover
, it will take the
communication
system to another level
such
as easy access without time waste, share the message of these convenient facts growing
number
Suggestion
numbers
of the population willing to
contact
via
internet
.
However
, there is another embarrassing side of
this
internet
communication
which is hardly delivering emotional feeling towards dear one, which might encourage the less understanding in the relationship while it will make a long-distance relationship longer
also
when considering
internet
based business which all running without
face
to
face
contact
but in all the time it would not give advantages to all citizens there will be a chance to make cheat, so, trust among modern
communication
would be declined. In conclusion, evolution of modern technology definitely growing to be in the future due to the fast-moving world,
hence
the citizens
also
going to follow the nature of growth and
also
they will implement those in their personal life, which all habits destroy the
face
to
face
contact

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