with an increasing population communicating via the internet and text messaging, face to face conversation will be a thing of the past. To what extant do you agree

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People

had communicated with each other

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face

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in the

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past, but

now people structured with the busy working scenario,

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moreover they

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moreover, they

get practice to communicate with the

internet

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such

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as email,

skype

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Skype

, video calls,

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wats' up

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waits up

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etc.. , while they do not have

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a chance

the chance

to meet each other. I totally agree with

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statement. There are compelling reasons

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for agreeing to this

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statement.

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Firstly due

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to the development I the information and

communication

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technology, the increasing number of people

prefer

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prefers

contact

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each other through modern tools.

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, people for the sake of work, education purpose moving to a different region and countries far away from their place,

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, they

can not

cannot

communicate

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face

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with their family, spouse, friends at all, while they are in

contact

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through a video

calls

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call

and

skype which

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Skype, which

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is really helpful to the long-distance relationship

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, it will take the

communication

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system to another level

such

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as easy access without time waste, share the message of these convenient facts growing

number

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numbers

of the population willing to

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via

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, there is another embarrassing side of

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internet

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communication

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which is hardly delivering emotional feeling towards dear one, which might encourage the less understanding in the relationship while it will make a long-distance relationship longer

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when considering

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based business which all running without

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face

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contact

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but in all the time it would not give advantages to all citizens there will be a chance to make cheat, so, trust among modern

communication

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would be declined. In conclusion, evolution of modern technology definitely growing to be in the future due to the fast-moving world,

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the citizens

also

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going to follow the nature of growth and

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they will implement those in their personal life, which all habits destroy the

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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304 words

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