You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Once children enter school, teachers have more influence on their intellectual and social developments than parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
There is currently a contentious argument over whether
teachers’ impact
on children is much more significant than their parents’. In my opinion, I totally disagree with Suggestion
the teachers’ impact
this
opinion because parents are more aware of the kind of intelligence
their children have and children
are more exposed to their parents social behaviours.
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have children and
Firstly
, parents have a greater influence on children’s intellectual development
than teachers do because parents have better comprehension of their children’s intelligence
. In other words
, parents give birth to their children, so they can know exactly how intelligent their children are and what specific type of intelligence
ability
their children obtain. Therefore
, parents can choose an effective way to foster their children’s cognitive development
. For example
, when my brother was a student, my parents knew that he had special
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a special ability
special abilities
ability
to deal with numbers and statistics, so they bought lots of books in mathematics to encourage him to develop his mathematical ability
more.
Second
, children’s social development
is more affected by their parents than by
their teachers because students are more exposed to their parents’ social Suggestion
from
behaviors
. manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
Although
children go to school everyday
, they stay at home with their parents the rest of their time. Suggestion
every day
Hence
, they are more influened
by their parents a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc
influenced
social behavioral
patterns and habits. To illustrate, in my Accept comma addition
social, behavioural
social behavioural
neighborhood
, there is a 7-year-old child whose mother is always a surrounding or nearby region
neighbourhood
agressive
to other people. Despite of the fact that the child is educated by her teacher that she should be polite to others, she easily gets angry at other people. having or showing determination and energetic pursuit of your ends
aggressive
Moreover
, she does not greet elderly people and avoids saying thank you when receiving a gift from someone.
In conclusion, I completely disagree with the notion that teachers at school have greater effect
on children’s intellectual and social Suggestion
a greater effect
development
once they start going to school because parents have better understanding
of their children’s Suggestion
a better understanding
intelligence
and children’s social development
is substantially affected by their parents’ daily behaviours. Given this
situation, It seems that teachers and parents should cooperate in order that they can develop children’s intellectual ability
and social behaviors
better.manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
behaviour
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