Internet will replace written books. Do you agree or disagree?

These days,
information
technology has developed rapidly and it might grow faster in the future. It is
rumored
gossip (usually a mixture of truth and untruth) passed around by word of mouth
rumoured
that written books are gradually replaced by electric devices and
information
from the internet due to its diverse benefits. From my point of view, the Internet cannot be an effective replacement for the written book.
First
of all, it might be an unauthentic source of
information
. Not all the
information
on the Internet is certified. People can upload anything on the Internet whether the
information
is correct or not.
Therefore
, provided with false
information
, it will cause mistakes at work.
Moreover
, very
rare valuable
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rare, valuable
information
resources are provided for free on the Internet. And the valuable
information
from websites usually costs
expensively
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expended
.
Hence
, having written books would be much more convenient.
Second
, locating exactly what we need is sometimes as hard as finding a needle in a haystack. The Internet is like a huge, chaotic, unorganized warehouse. People cannot find
everything even
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everything, even
if they search in various of websites.
As a result
, it might be difficult to find the
information
we
need we
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need, we
can not
can not
cannot
complete our task
efficently
with efficiency; in an efficient manner
efficiently
.
Last
but not least,
information
from written books are easier to control. Contrary to
library
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the library
a library
where junk
information
are rarely collected
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is rarely collected
, on the Internet, people can put everything in place. All
information
posted on the web so far has not had any certification.
This
is extremely harmful, especially for young people, when they are not carefully educated. It can lead to spreading false and maybe harmful
information
to the readers, as well as
affect
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affecting
negatively to the mentioned object. Undoubtedly, books are crucial references for the
study career
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study, career
of human kind.
Although
the Internet are improving
efficently
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efficiently
efficiency
efficiencies
, books still play an important and
unreplaceable
impossible to replace
irreplaceable
position in education.

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