It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

Children are at

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of their life when they merely distinguish between the right and the wrong. It is very necessary for parents and teachers to teach them the same,

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, by suggestion or advice followed by

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as many times their inexperienced mind

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tempts

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should not affect a child negatively; rather it must be constructive for them. Nowadays children are most vulnerable to get affected by surroundings and electronic media as they easily get exposed to

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media. It is impossible to protect them getting exposed to the external environment.

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it is mandatory for parents or teachers

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and sometimes

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is necessary to protect them. At an early

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, a child possesses boundless curiosity as he is just exposed to an outside world or society.

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imitate what they see and that turns out to be disastrous at times. To avoid that minor

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is the best way as

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the fear

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makes them stay away from

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the many wrong doings

. To prove that, the Stanford University had done many surveys

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children and the results show that 80% children who had already been punished for their particular mistakes had not repeated the same, on a flip side only 40% who are just advised.

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, punishments should always be associated with some lessons for children.

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must be fruitful and it must not be physically or mentally harmful.

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, world's nursery in Japan asks children to plant trees as a

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. Many schools in India punish children by asking them to run few kilometres.

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punishments are constructive for children's health and society as well. To conclude, I believe that children have to learn about

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the positives

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and

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is one of the effective ways to guide them learn

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distinction.

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, parents and teachers must use constructive and positive punishments to show them the right path.