It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?
Children are at
such
age
of their life when they merely distinguish between the right and the wrong. It is very necessary for parents and teachers to teach them the same, first
, by suggestion or advice followed by punishment
as many times their inexperienced mind tempt
them to Suggestion
tempts
do
mistakes. engage in
make
Punishment
should not affect a child negatively; rather it must be constructive for them.
Nowadays children are most vulnerable to get affected by surroundings and electronic media as they easily get exposed to such
media. It is impossible to protect them getting exposed to the external environment. Hence
it is mandatory for parents or teachers to make
them aware of morality and injustice at Suggestion
make
this
age
and sometimes punishment
is necessary to protect them. At an early age
, a child possesses boundless curiosity as he is just exposed to an outside world or society. Thus they
imitate what they see and that turns out to be disastrous at times. To avoid that minor Accept comma addition
Thus, they
punishment
is the best way as fear
of Suggestion
the fear
punishment
makes them stay away from many wrong doings
. To prove that, the Stanford University had done many surveys Suggestion
the many wrong doings
on
children and the results show that 80% children who had already been punished for their particular mistakes had not repeated the same, on a flip side only 40% who are just advised.
Suggestion
of
On the other hand
, punishments should always be associated with some lessons for children. Punishment
must be fruitful and it must not be physically or mentally harmful. For example
, world's nursery in Japan asks children to plant trees as a punishment
. Many schools in India punish children by asking them to run few kilometres. Such
punishments are constructive for children's health and society as well.
To conclude, I believe that children have to learn about positives
and negatives at Suggestion
the positives
this
age
and punishment
is one of the effective ways to guide them learn this
distinction. However
, parents and teachers must use constructive and positive punishments to show them the right path.Submitted by elaineguansing91 on
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