Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.

The important aspect of sports is that it is not confined within physical

activities but

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activities, but

it carries the whole pride of a country. A part of the population argues that it is acceptable to pay the sports experts with a plethora of money when compared to workers of various valuable jobs. Whereas, the rest of the society disagrees with

this

idea.

this

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This

essay will examine the practicality of

this

issue.

when

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When

looking at the positive side, countries that have an

unhealty

not in or exhibiting good health in body or mind

unhealthy

relationship among themselves find games as one of the best platforms to release their emotions.

for

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For

example, countries like

india

a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947

India

and

pakistan

a Muslim republic that occupies the heartland of ancient south Asian civilization in the Indus River valley; formerly part of India; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947

Pakistan

are always on the edge of

war but

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war, but

when considering the human rights it is impossible for them to ignite a fight within

themvelves

reflexive form of "them"

themselves

.

therefore

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Therefore

, they chose cricket is a vital battle ground to display the

strenght

the property of being physically or mentally strong

strength

of these

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