Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective. •comics •books •radio •television •film •theatre

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Recently, the debate whether books, film or television
is
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are
the most effective way of communication has become highly
dispuatious
inclined or showing an inclination to dispute or disagree, even to engage in law suits
disputatious
. Supporters validate that movies and televisions are up-to-date and easy.
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, opponents proclaim that they are time-consuming and may spread rummers. Regarding the books,
although
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it has been stated that they are the most accurate and cheap, others believe they are hard to
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find
and
lackluster
lacking brilliance or vitality
lacklustre
. We should reveal generally their positives and negatives for you to judge, shouldn't we?
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Therefore
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Therefore, this
this
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essay will list and modifies each ones pros and cons. Myriads of perks were mentioned for the TVs and films. Not only
does they enable
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do they enable
does they enable
people to know the latest news, but
also
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without exerting a great effort. Unless the information is up-to-date, it will be useless. It's very practical and flexible mean of communication.
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, even in winter, when you are squeezed and freezing in your bed, you can just press the remote button to know the latest news. These are the lagniappes that hordes of
people whether
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people, whether
7,17 or 70 can be reluctant to lose.
Hoever
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However
, we can't turn a blind eye up upon the drawbacks. Despite the fact that they are very beneficial especially, for lazy people, they may be time-consuming and may share wrong news.
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may lead to a bad reputation
beeing
the state or fact of existing
being
been
shared about people.
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, if I have the spent the whole day in front of films,
this
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will
definielly
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
destroys
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destroy
my social skills and avoid me from practicing sports. Television is like a sword with two sides, so I guess the best way to use is the moderate-level by watching it for only two hours per day. Viewing the other side of the coin, which is the most debatable, books are claimed to be not expensive and accurate,
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however it
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however, it
has a plethora of negatives
such
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as that it's not always available and some personalities are not even
intrested
having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern
interested
in reading books. Cheapness is an overwhelming benefit, which should be taken into consideration. Especially,
beacause
for the reason that; on account of
because
you will have to buy
this
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book daily to be aware of the latest news.
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However it
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However, it
is boring;
beacuse
for the reason that; on account of
because
there is neither variety in tones nor pictures.
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, My mum used to buy a daily publishes book; to know the
celebraties'
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celebrity
celebrities
updates, but I found it useless and not
intresting
arousing or holding the attention
interesting
. Both advantages and
disadvntages
the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position
disadvantages
are available and must be considered. Either televisions, films or book
are
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is
more effective is actually a great topic, which needs years to be discussed.
This
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essay stated both their pros and cons. To cap it up, I think that TVs are a better mean to communicate; because I am a lazy person
,
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,
so I prefer
laying
the deliberate act of deviating from the truth
lying
in bed and being aware of
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.
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, I suggest to use the equilibrium theory, while using it, by avoiding to many hours spent in front of it.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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