The air-conditioner in your flat broke three weeks aago anf it is the middle of summer. You asked the landlord to repair it and he promised to send someone but no-one has contacted you yet. Write a letter to the landlord complaining about the situation. In your letter: explain the problem, remind the landlord about his promise, say what you want him to do.

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to complain about the air-conditioner which has been broken in your apartment for three weeks. I
has
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rented your flat at 140A Dien Bien Phu Street. As I remember, on Sunday three weeks ago, I certainly contacted you by messenger and you promised to take someone repair it. The
second
time I called you when you weren’t home but you
also
make sure but since
then
no-one repaired it. So, I hope you will recall because of the hot temperature in the middle of summer.
This
is the reason why I can’t focus on something I do, and I feel unpleasant now. Please keep your engagement and contact me soon. I look forward to hearing from you.
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faithfully, Yen.
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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