The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise this information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first chart shows the amount of
energy
consumed by various activities in an Australian household whereas
the second
chart shows the greenhouse
gas
emissions
resulting from this
consumption.
An average Australian household uses the highest amount of energy
(42%) for heating while
water heating consumes 30% of energy
. Refrigeration, lighting and cooling consume 7%, 4% and 2% of energy
respectively. Thus
cooling consumes the least amount of energy
. Other appliances consume 15% of energy
.
Energy
consumption leads to emission
of Correct article usage
the emission
greenhouse
gas
. According to
the second
chart, refrigeration and lighting emit 14% and 8% of greenhouse
gas
although
they consume only 7% and 4% of energy
. Water heating accounts for 32% of the total greenhouse
gas
emissions
whereas
heating accounts for 15% of the emissions
. While
other appliances used only 15% of the energy
they produced 28% of the total greenhouse
gas
emissions
. Thus
, greenhouse
gas
emissions
caused by heating is
considerably lower than Correct subject-verb agreement
are
that
is
caused by refrigeration and lighting.Unnecessary verb
apply
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