The give graph shows the consumption of fast food in UK (per week) from 1970 to 1990. Write a report for a university lecturer making comparisons where relevant and reporting the main features.
The line graph provides information about the quality of three different kinds of fast food consumed in the United Kingdom over a twenty-year period between 1970 and 1990.
Overall
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it is clear that
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consumption
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hamburger
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hamburgers
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
experienced Use synonyms
upward
trend during the research period. Correct article usage
an upward
In addition
, the Linking Words
amount
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pizza
that people consumed declined considerably.
In 1970, there was a steadiness in the Use synonyms
amount
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pizza
, on average, people consumed 300 Use synonyms
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approximated
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grams
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fish
and Use synonyms
chips
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40
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and 40
grams
for Use synonyms
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a hamburger
the hamburger
hamburger
. Between 1970 and 1980, there was a dramatic slump in the quality of Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
pizza
by 90 Use synonyms
grams
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While
the figure for Linking Words
Use synonyms
hamburger
, Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
continued to increase to 80 Use synonyms
grams
and 150 Use synonyms
grams
respectively. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, end of 1980, the Linking Words
consumption
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pizza
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fish
and Use synonyms
chips
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were
at the same Correct subject-verb agreement
was
210
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at 210
grams
.
In 1985, the Use synonyms
consumption
of Use synonyms
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
climbed quickly to 300 Use synonyms
grams
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Additionally
, end of 1985, the Linking Words
amount
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pizza
and Use synonyms
hamburger
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were
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both
consumed at 210 Correct pronoun usage
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grams
. From 1985 to 1990, the quality of Use synonyms
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
jumped sharply to 500 and become the highest figure during the research period. At the same time, there was a dramatic Use synonyms
significantly
in the Change the word
significant
amount
of Use synonyms
Use synonyms
hamburger
that people consumed from 120 Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
grams
to 280 Use synonyms
grams
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, there was a slight growth in the Linking Words
consumption
of Use synonyms
pizza
, with a rise of over 10 Use synonyms
grams
in just 5 years from 1985 to 1990.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, hamburger, fish, chips, amount, pizza, grams with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
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