many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. some people however that other types of progress are equally important for a country
Primary goals
of many Suggestion
The primary goals
country
authorities are to develop their economy. Some people have views that other types of progress should be taken into consideration of
Governments as the same as economic development
While It would be better to thrive economy in any Suggestion
by
country
, I do believe that other measures of developments should not be forgotten
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it is real fact that every Accept space
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country
's goal is making progress in its economic situation for a variety of reasons. Firstly
,
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for
ordinary people's lives. Suggestion
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educational
,
and health services will be improved or renewed by investing in construction or giving payment to the workersAccept space
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Secondly
, in the compotative
world, only wealthy countries can show their powers globally through their economic potentials in order to involving competition or competitiveness
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on
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environment
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the environment
in
the industrial countriesSuggestion
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there are many climate issues people are facingAccept space
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in
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layer decreasing, a colorless gas (O3) soluble in alkalis and cold water; a strong oxidizing agent; can be produced by electric discharge in oxygen or by the action of ultraviolet radiation on oxygen in the stratosphere (where it acts as a screen for ultraviolet radiation)
ozone
green house
effects. today, millions of people are suffiring from some deseas caused by climate changes as I mentioned above
in conclusion economic progress for government should be a building with glass walls and roof; for the cultivation and exhibition of plants under controlled conditions
greenhouse
first
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