It is generally believed that some people are born with certains talents, for instance for sports or music, and other are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musicians. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Someone who is
excellent
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excelling
in a field of sports or
music
is often called genius. Some people think those geniuses are born with gifts
,,
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,
while the others believe that
people's
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person's
success due to the education. In my opinion, the former's view is more reasonable
beacuse
for the reason that; on account of
because
many excellent people
are perform
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are performing
are performed
different with other peers when they were young and the differences are really existing between individuals. Many celebrities perform more excellent than ordinary people in their childhood. Normally, they are
more sensible
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more sensitive
and interested in listening
music
, playing instruments or taking sports than other peers. Compared with ordinary pupils, they can sing the song and follow the rhythm accurately without
music
teachers' help, or they can run faster or jump higher than other children.
For example
, Mozart
begin
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begins
to learn piano from 5-year-old, and he can compose the
music
in only 7 years old, which is impossible for most
chilren
a young person of either sex
children
who learn an instrument only for two years.
In addition
, there
is
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are
differences between individuals. Some researchers could argue that there is no
different
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difference
between people's
intellgences
the ability to comprehend; to understand and profit from experience
intelligence
or structure of brains.
For instance
, the famous scientist, Einstein's brain had been taken out after he passed away. It is interesting that his brain's structure
are
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is
totally same with ordinary people's, and even a bit smaller.
However
, the brain is not only
important organ
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an important organ
important organs
of human beings. There are more factors that should be considered,
such
as muscles, eyes, hearts and so on. Many different elements cause the differences between individuals, and when many
benefical
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
elements concentrate on a person, who will be genius and perform more advantages than the other people. In conclusion, I agree that some people are born with many natural advantages, because the geniuses are
vary
used as an intensifier
very
different with others at school age and it is existing that many differences between each person.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • innate talent
  • genetic predisposition
  • prodigy
  • structured training regime
  • practice and dedication
  • nature and nurture
  • high-quality training
  • persistent effort
  • proper guidance
  • excellence
  • proficiency
  • natural abilities
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