some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices

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It is obvious, in nowadays people benefit from having many choices compares with the past which the options for doing or having something was fewer. In my opinion,
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statement is partially true, because as we can have more choices, it is not happening the same thing in developing nations. I agree with
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report as the science and technology were rapidly developed in
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last century
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the last century
, the choices that we have are much more in any department.
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, because of their develop they created a lot of opportunities, regarding education and how people can learn about several fields and improved their skills.
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, having more choices on something, it makes you smarter.
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, if you have to choose from, all the means that leads in the destination that you want, you can choose the option
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more useful to you regarding to money or time that you want to spend.
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, the most of the developing countries have not the benefits of the choices
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with us.
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, on the continent of Africa, there are many people that they don’t have choices in simple things like to drink water at any time or to having a meal.
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, according to surveys the level of education in these countries is very low. People have not the right to choosing regarding studies and
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, they cannot get the knowledge of anything. To conclude, I believe
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unequal distribution of how the choices separate from the world.
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, I cannot ignore that it is true that the options have increased for the biggest part in the world and help us to make ourselves more versatile.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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