Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays, the debate about popular events and how vital they are in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way, has caused a ruckus among myriads of citizens. Typically, almost everything in our life has its supporters yet is overshadowed with its incontestable opponents.
This
essay will reveal to what extend do i
personally agree with refers to the speaker or writer
I
this
point of view.
Although
I may catch flak from others, it cannot be denied that not only do popular events make international tensions easier
, but it Suggestion
eased
ease
easing
also
aids in safely releasing hordes of emotions. For example
, if football World Cup
is set in our country, uncountable foreigners worldwide will be striving to watch Suggestion
the football World Cup
this
match in the stadium and not only watching it from a screen. Actually, this
will increase the availability of hard foreign currencies which
will increase the country's GDP and economic growth will occur. Eventually, the most salient point is, that it will encourage domestic business and higher reputation for the country will be held!
Despite the obvious positives, one cannot turn a blind eye on the incontestable negatives. Accept comma addition
currencies, which
First
and foremost, audience
may have a misconception of that they have to win Suggestion
an audience
the audience
this
match which creates a toxic and unhealthy cheering environment. For example
, two people got shot before during
the match by the other team and unfortunately, they were dead.
To take all points into consideration, I have Accept comma addition
before, during
resolute unwavering advocate
that these events taking place is not necessarily beneficial; Suggestion
a resolute unwavering advocate
however if
people were just watching them for fun or even out of curiosity, Accept comma addition
however, if
this
will significantly have undeniable merits. Lastly
, I recommend that campaigns should be held in schools -starting from grade 3- to raise awareness about how harmful it is to be highly unhealthly
addicted to a specific sport.in a detrimental manner
unhealthily
unhealthy
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