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The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The graph illustrates the data of university female and male
graduates
 in Canada
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over the period of 16 years from 1992 to 2007.
Overall
, looking
into
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 the graph the
numbers
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number
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 of female
graduates
 in Canada
were
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 certainly high compared to male
graduates
 throughout the given span of years.
Firstly
 in the year 1992, female
graduates
 had a hike of nearly 99,000.
Whereas
, males were slightly lower in
number
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a number
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of
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about 71,000.
However
,
on the other hand
, both female and male
graduates
 had an increase in number in the year between 1994 and 1996 (approx. 1, 05,000 and 75,000 respectively).
Moreover
, in1998 both female and male
graduates
 had a fall in the number.
Nevertheless
,
finally
 by the period of 2006 female and male
graduates
 had a steady increase
approx
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. 1, 48,000 and 98,000 respectively. To summarize,
as
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a
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 result
of
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what
stand
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 out
the
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 graph is the numbers
female
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of female
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graduates
 were higher
consequently
 than male
graduates
 of universities in Canada for the year 1992 to 2007.
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