The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line chart compares the number of birth and death
rates
in New Zeeland since 1901 and future expectations until 2101.
In 1901, the level of fertility was at just over 20,000, whereas
the figures of
death Change preposition
for
rates
were lower, about
10,000. The number of births reached the highest point at about 60,000 in 1961 and Change preposition
at about
followed
by a Add a missing verb
was followed
wildly
fluctuation over a period of 40 years. It is noteworthy that the mortality Change the adverb
wild
rates
had a steady increase and appeared to fluctuate in
the same time until 2001. Change preposition
at
Furthermore
, it is anticipated that there will be 45 thousand newborns in New Zealand by 2101. However
, in term
of fatality, the Fix the agreement mistake
terms
rates
are likely to peak at just below 60 thousand by 2061 before dropping back with
a few Change preposition
to
thousands
Change to singular
thousand
at the end
of the period.
Overall
, there is expected to be a downward trend regarding the natality rates
and also
an upward trend among death
population.Correct article usage
the death
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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