In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping center or mall to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?

It is irrefutable that due to the
becoming greater or larger
consumerism most
Accept comma addition
consumerism, most
of the people buy
expensive product
an expensive product
expensive products
from the supermarket or from
the mall
a mall
which leads to the detrimental effects to local shops. It is
negative development
a negative development
for most of the local shopkeeper and
essay shall cast light on my perspective. Starting with the reason behind my perspective the prime one is
negative growth effect financially to
local shopkeeper
local shopkeepers
the local shopkeeper
. To make it more clear, the lesser the customer in local shops the lesser they earn.
For instance
, if
the majority
of people prefer supermarket to buy essential products it decrease the value of local shops.
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