You study at a university and often use the university library. The library closes very early in the evening and you are not able to stay there and study. Write a letter to the Manager of the library. In the letter, Describe who you are and the details of your university course Explain the problem at the library Suggest what you think the Manager should do

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my concern regarding the closing hours of the library as they are not flexible enough to study. I am Vijaya, pursuing

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semester in computer science and passionate about learning new technologies that helps me to build my career. As soon as my classes end at 4pm, I rush to the library to perform research , as it is one of the best

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to acquire knowledge

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and to gather materials that

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to complete my assignments. But, the librarian closes by 5pm , which is not a sufficient period in order to finish my tasks.

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, I end up leaving with unfinished assignments that

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my grades. It would be great if you can extend the closing time for an hour as it will help students who are preparing for their exams.

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, I would appreciate

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you could replace the computers in the library because they are outdated and slow at performance, which is interrupting our learning time. I hope you consider my

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and take appropriate action. Yours sincerely, Vijaya

srivijaya.vijiSat Feb 22 2020

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