The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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The chart gives information about
percentage
of poor families in Australia during 1999. Add an article
the percentage
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the highest proportion of poverty achieved
at types Add a missing verb
was achieved
such
as sole parent and single without children, while
single aged people
and aged couples had the lowest one.
Single people
amounted the
greatest percentage in considering Change preposition
to the
statistic
: 21%-sole parents and 19%-who do not have children. Fix the agreement mistake
statistics
However
, single aged persons were just 6% of all.
Couples had better results comparing
with lonely Wrong verb form
compared
people
. Two humans with babies constituted 12%, what
was equal to 933000 Correct pronoun usage
which
people
and couples, which did not have children reached to
7%. The smallest proportion was 4%, which aged pairs had.Change preposition
apply
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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