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Now that computers can very well translate all kinds of languages in the world, do we really need to learn more languages in future? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Technology
 has become so advanced that it can translate any
language
. Many people believe that because of technological support, it is no longer necessary to teach children any additional
language
. In my opinion, I completely disagree with the statement because over-dependence on computers affects our personal growth and
also
 it leads to a communication gap. Communication through
technology
 will lead to lack of understanding among the people. The same word can have different meanings in different contexts.
Likewise
, different words can have the same meaning. Using a particular word in the right context requires some special skills which computer applications do not possess.
For instance
, club, band, association and group are all synonyms of society, but not all of them can fit in one particular context;
therefore
 there will be some lack of clarity when computers are used to translate. A
language
 is an expression of a culture which only a human being can understand properly. At the same time, over dependence on computers affects our personal growth. When we expose children to the
technology
 to translate a
language
,
then
 we become over dependent on computers. The result is that we fail to develop our intellectual abilities, which
further
 hinders our ability to solve complex problems.
Thus
, the cognitive ability to perform a particular task tends to diminish.
Furthermore
, we will not have access to
technology
 every time and everywhere.
For example
, in remote places we will not be able to make use of
technology
 due to lack of support;
therefore
, in those cases, we need to develop our own learning skills in order to communicate with the locals. In conclusion, over dependence on computers will spoil our intellectual development and
also
such
technology
 can create a communication gap among the people.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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