Some people says we should use free space in town and city for plantation a d some says that it should be used for construction. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is very crucial to plant more and more trees in order to protect our environment. Two groups of people argue that free plots in the city and town should be used to seedling trees or some people says that housing facilities should be

build

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built

instead

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. In my opinion, greenery is significant for the betterment of atmosphere. My opinion is outlined in

this

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essay. One good reason for plantation is to combat with global warming. In

this

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modern world, industrialization is increasing day by

day which

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day, which

ultimately lead to pollution because they release poisonous gasses into

air

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the air

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Moreover people

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Moreover, people

use

vehicles even

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vehicles, even

to go to nearby places these vehicles with fuel,

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release carbon dioxide in

air

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the air

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, these poisonous

gasses

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gas's

gas

effect can be reduced by

oxygen which

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oxygen, which

absorbs all the pollutants from air, oxygen released by trees. So trees

plays

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play

an important role in providing us fresh and pure environment. Another good reason for plantation is, they provide edibles. Even the leaves of some plants are full of nutrients and forest provide us fruits and vegetables. Humans

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depend on

forest

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the forest

for wood for many purposes like furniture.

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comodia

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the comedy

comedy

command

comedian

is country

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where 52% of total land used for forest. Due to which life of people over there is great.

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this

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, forests are natural habitat for the animals and birds and they

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depend on trees for their food. In conclusion, it is really important to plant trees

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of building new homes. It plays

significant role

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a significant role

to reduce global warming and provide dietary benefits.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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