An essay to introduce yourself. What is your background in English? what do you want to tell the teacher?

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My name is Pongsakorn Poovantana. I was born in Bangkok, Thailand. I am an international student in Canada. My parents are both working in Thailand and I don’t want my life to be like them. I
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I could spend my life in Canada. I
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I could apply be a permanent residence in Canada. I am considering a career in chemistry
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because obviously it is a requirement. The reason that I chose
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among other English
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is because that I think Composition will help me to boost my academic skills in every aspect of English. When I was choosing
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, I have one concern about
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. I am a bit worried that my grade would be low because I am an international student. My aim
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is to be able to use, write, read, and speak English fluently. I
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. I studied English since I was in elementary grade in my country, but more professionally in middle school. In grade 10, I took an EAL composition 11
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and Composition 11. As I mentioned, my goal for English
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is to be able to write well, read faster, speak more fluently, and develop my
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skills. Personally, I hate writing and reading parts in English. I always get bored every time that I have to write an
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or read a novel. My
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part in English is to watch movies in English and answer some questions. My challenges about English
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are writing and reading.
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don’t like to write a long
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on paper. I would prefer typing my
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and hand it in because my bad and messy handwriting. I have my laptop that I could bring to school
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a slow reader, so I would spend more time on reading a paragraph that others. I have a plan to take an IELTS exam
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class could help me develop and prepare my reading and writing skills before I will take an exam. I
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that
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class could help me to practice my speaking and listening skills
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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