The chart below shows the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
GRAPHICS in
THIS
TEST SHOW us THE TOP TEN
COUNTRIES
WITH THE HIGHEST ALLOCATE ON TRAVEL IN 2014. THE display of EXPENDITURE IS BASED ON THE CALCULATION OF US $
Billion
.
COUNTRIES
calculation CONTAINS
CHINA
, the UNITED STATES, GERMANY, the UNITED KINGDOM, SINGAPORE, SOUTH KOREA, HONG KONG, INDIA, MALAYSIA,
TAIWAN
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and TAIWAN
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.
GRAPH
IS USED MULTIPLE OF 20 SCALES WHICH STARTS FROM 0 TO 120. THE
GRAPH
SHOWED WITH A HORIZONTAL DISPLAY WHICH IS ACCOMPANIED by THE SEPARATOR LINE IN THE SCALE WITH VALUE 4.
THIS
GRAPH
WAS RELATED TO THE SOURCE FROM UNWTO
COUNTRIES
WITH THE HIGHEST
COSTUMER
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CUSTOMER
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CONSUME
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CONSUMPTION
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ON TRAVEL
2014
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IN 2014
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FALL INTO
CHINA
. The number one COUNTRY WITH CONCENTRATE 110 US $
Billion
.
Next
RATED ACCORDED TO THE UNITED STATES AND GERMANY WITH 85 US $
Billion
, and
also
followed by the UNITED KINGDOM WITH 55 US $
Billion
, SOUTH KOREA AND HONG KONG WITH 20 US $
Billion
, INDIA WITH 15 US $
Billion
,
then
MALAYSIA WITH 12 US $
Billion
. The
LAST
RATED in graphic showed by the country of
TAIWAN
WITH 10 US $
Billion
consumed. COMPARISON OF DONATE
USER
ON TRAVEL
CHINA
WITH
TAIWAN
CONTAINED 100 US $
Billion
. As the
graph
show
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shows
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the
USER
EXPEND ON
CHINA
IS 11 TIMES LARGER THAN
TAIWAN
. THERE ARE 2 STATE
COUNTRIES
THAT HAVE THE EQUATION OF SPENDING COSTUMERS each other. Some
COUNTRIES
IN ASIA
was
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were
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telling us to CONTINUE and DOMINATE the
ALLOCATE
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allocated
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USER
COMPARED TO OTHER continents. THE
CHINA
COUNTRY BECOMES THE BIGGEST SPENDING
USER
IN 2014.
CHINA
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CHINA'S
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NEIGHBOURING
COUNTRIES
, HONG KONG AND
TAIWAN
ARE INCLUDED IN
LIST
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THE LIST
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. THAT
ALSO
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IS ALSO
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RELATED TO
NUMBER
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THE NUMBER
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OF POPULATIONS WHERE THERE ARE POTENTIALS FOR VERY BIG TRAVELS.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, billion, china, taiwan, graph, user with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 4 times.
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