these days many of us prefer to throw damaged things away, whereas in the past people used to repair damaged items and keep them for a long time. explain why you this change has happened. what are the effects of this change in attitude?
My
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generation had many skills that young people lack Correct your spelling
mother's
today
In the past people could mend clothes, sew on buttons and fix a broken tap. but this
is not true of current generations who tend to replace and not repair This
essay will discuss why these changes have occurred and what effects this
is having Today
fashion changes quickly, but in the past it changed slowly Clothing and furniture for example would last
for many years; even generations However
, these days with pervasive advertising and communication via social media, information about new items travels quickly and we tend to throw out the old to buy the new. Another reason that fashions
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fashion changes
change
is that manufacturers are motivated to make goods that don't last
very long. For example
cars today
are built to last
five to ten years, since in the past cars would last
longer By having early obsolescence manufacturers can sell more goods. This
change
m attitude has unskilled the public and is damaging our environment We have lost both the skills and the will to keep up our possessions In fact often we see it as exciting to make new purchases Another change
is that we now create more
negative environmental impact because many of the goods we buy and throw out are not biodegradable We have become a generation of consumers and we are damaging the environment , Add an article
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This
is a huge change
from the past. In conclusion, today
we tend to buy new items than
repair older possessions. In the process most of us have lost the skills and the want to repair older items and a Rephrase
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further
consequence is that we are damaging our environment due to
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite