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some people think violent films have negative effect on people and should be banned. other think that they are just relaxation. Discuss both sides and give opinion.

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These days, violent movies
becomes
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become
 the priority of the youngsters. But what is the most effective method for dealing with
this
 by conducting the seminars for the toddlers. Some people believe that the violent films should be banned by the government because it has
bad impact
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a bad impact
 on the youth. I somewhat disagree and in
this
 essay
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 will support my opinion with examples.
Firstly
, These films encourage the people to do stunts in real life.
Therefore
, they
becomes
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become
 aggressive by nature.
For example
, They do not tolerate even a joke. If the follow these kind of films they will become anti social. Another reason why
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 disagree, people
starts
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start
 indulging in unethical activities.
For instance
, they
begins
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begin
 to take drugs, smuggling and
gambling especially
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gambling, especially
 youngsters. I strongly believe that these films harms the youth in
direct or indirect way
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a direct or indirect way
. What is more, teenagers should be aware of their morals.
On the other hand
, violent pictures are
great source
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a great source
 of enjoyment and stress busters
also
 because these films reduce the tensions from their
lifes
a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
life
.
In addition
, they uplift their confidence to raise their voice against exploitation.
As a result
, films are the relaxation mode of the community. In conclusion,
although
 it is a common belief that violent pictures should be banned. I believe that people
becomes
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become
 more offensive and begins to do immoral activities.
personally
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Personally
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 think government should have to conduct awareness seminars for the youth.

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