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Some children can leran more efficiently by watching t.v. therefore ,children should watching T.v regularly both in school and at home ? do you agree or not ?

#children #leran #v #school #home
Technology
overcome
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has overcome
overcomes
humans
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the humans
. With the advancement and
industrilization
the development of industry on an extensive scale
industrialization
industrialisation
 we all become more dependent on
world
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the world
 of media. Learning
become
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becomes
 more effective by doing. Watching television both in school and at home makes students more focused on media. I
am totally disagree
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totally disagree
 with the above stated statement. Overall,
media
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the media
 is very
much important part of
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much an important part of
 todays
life but
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life, but
 along with some benefits it
also exist
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also exists
 some disadvantages.
Stuents
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Students
 should learn in
realistic world
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the real world
real world
a real world
 rather them to grasp things from
abstrat
consider a concept without thinking of a specific example; consider abstractly or theoretically
abstract
 world. When children see practical things and try to learn from
them
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them, then
then
 it will be helpful for them to retain the things for
long period
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a long period
long periods
 of time. Learning in natural settings and while
self performing
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self, performing
 is
a
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an
 old mantra for effective and efficient teaching.
Secondly
, students will forget the importance of books if they become more reliable
on
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about
t
the thing named or in question
it
.v. We have no control on the content
that is
 being available
on
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for
 media. We
donot
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do not
 know
wheather
introduces two alternatives
whether
weather
 it is good for the child or not. Watching tv for
prolonged period
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a prolonged period
prolonged periods
 of time
also
 make student violent, impatient and increases the mental stress of a child. On an average a person should watch 2-3 hours in watching televisions.
This
 will
also
reduces
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reduce
 the physical activity of a person and make them more prone
for
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to
 obesity and overweight. Learning by shows for
long peroid
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a long period
long period
long periods
 of time
also
effect
have an effect upon
affect
 the eyesight of children and leads to some kind of
regractive
of or relating to or capable of refraction
refractive
 error
among
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between
 them. In conclusion, learning can be more effective in natural settings. Children should be motivated
for
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in
 studying more from books rather
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
 becoming more dependent on television.
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