The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
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The pie chart gives information on average percentages of three
nutrients
, namely, Sodium, Saturated fat and Added sugar in ordinary foods which are consumed by American individuals.
It is clear that
three types of
nutrients
are by far the most consumed in
dinner
and
snacks
. Among typical meals, breakfast includes a small percentage of unhealthy
nutrients
. In the first chart
average
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percentages
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percentage
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of Sodium which is consumed
in
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at
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dinner
is 43%.
This
figure for
snacks
and breakfast
are
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is
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14%. The
second
pie chart has the same trend as the first one. Regarding consumption of Added sugar in foods, through eating
snacks
, 42%
Added
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sugar is consumed, followed by
dinner
with 23% and
also
lunch and breakfast
19
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with 19
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% and 16% respectively.
Overall
, American people consume the most amount of
nutrients
in
dinner
and
snacks
.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words nutrients, dinner, snacks with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Nutrients
  • Unhealthy
  • Daily intake
  • Percentage
  • Carbohydrates
  • Fats
  • Proteins
  • Meals
  • Balanced diet
  • Consumption
  • Excess
  • Health implications
  • Obesity
  • Diabetes
  • Heart disease
  • Convenience foods
  • Fast foods
  • Socioeconomic factors
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Healthy eating habits
  • Dietary recommendations
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