The pie graph below shows how electricity is produced in Ireland and the table shows the primary reasons for using electricity in the same country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart displays the source of
power
generation in Ireland, and the table illustrates the main reasons for energy consumption in the same nation.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Coal and Gas generate the highest proportion of energy as compared to wind and solar as the least. In terms of percentage usage, heating is the major Linking Words
power
consumer, Use synonyms
in
contrary to electronics and phone charging as the lowest, Change preposition
apply
while
lighting and kitchen appliances are on average.
The coal Linking Words
power
plant, the biggest producer, supplied almost half of the entire Use synonyms
power
supply in Ireland. Use synonyms
Also
, the gas plant, provides a sufficient supply of more than a Linking Words
third
of the nation’s energy, Linking Words
while
solar and wind equally generates only a tenth of the total output.
Heating uses most of the electrical Linking Words
power
that consumes 55% of the total supply in the country. The other components, Use synonyms
such
as lighting, and kitchen, appliances have a percentage usage Linking Words
by
20%, and 15%, respectively. Change preposition
of
Furthermore
, consumer electronics and phone charging are equally using a minimal fraction of 5%.Linking Words
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