The pie graph below shows how electricity is produced in Ireland and the table shows the primary reasons for using electricity in the same country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie graph below shows how electricity is produced in Ireland and the table shows

the primary reasons for using electricity in the same country.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart displays the source of
power
generation in Ireland, and the table illustrates the main reasons for energy consumption in the same nation.
Overall
, Coal and Gas generate the highest proportion of energy as compared to wind and solar as the least. In terms of percentage usage, heating is the major
power
consumer,
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contrary to electronics and phone charging as the lowest,
while
lighting and kitchen appliances are on average. The coal
power
plant, the biggest producer, supplied almost half of the entire
power
supply in Ireland.
Also
, the gas plant, provides a sufficient supply of more than a
third
of the nation’s energy,
while
solar and wind equally generates only a tenth of the total output. Heating uses most of the electrical
power
that consumes 55% of the total supply in the country. The other components,
such
as lighting, and kitchen, appliances have a percentage usage
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20%, and 15%, respectively.
Furthermore
, consumer electronics and phone charging are equally using a minimal fraction of 5%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words power with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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