in the circumstances of the present-day world, children should be given every encouragement to regard the learning of several languages as normal; to suggest the contrary seems both prejudiced and harmful

In the modern-day world, multilingualism can not only enrich our knowledge in loads of fields

such

as politics, cultures, history,

etc but

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etc., but

etc. but

also

help people to get access to the civilization of mankind.

Thus

, some people hold the view that children should be emboldened that learning several languages is an ordinary thing to do while others disagree, saying that

this

may cause harm to them.

This

essay will weigh up both sides of the argument and give justifications why I advocate the former view. On the one hand, being able to speak different languages will help the children become more confident as they have

chance

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the chance

a chance

to approach to numerous practical information. That

also

means it will give the

speakers significant

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speakers, significant

advantage over others in the global job market. Ever since America and Britain became one of the greatest nations, English is

also

regarded as a worldwide language. While in the

past parents

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past, parents

would let their children go to several English classes with a view to mastering their children’s English level, in these days, just becoming skilled at two languages is barely adequate.

Therefore

, children are obligated to learn a

third

or fourth one in order to develop their potential as much as possible.

On the other hand

, the

mulitilingual

using or knowing more than one language

multilingual

curriculum can be a double-edged sword. Without proper methods, schools will

accidentially

without advance planning

accidentally

put pressure on their students. The key to success depends on quality, not quantity. Learning different languages in a short time might be over with some of them. Children who are suffering from stress will not be able to focus on any specific language.

This

will have a negative impact on both their study results and mental health.

Last

but not least,

although

studying many languages is encouraged by

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

and many other people, parents should not consider

this

to be normal. They are

inadvertedly

without knowledge or intention

inadvertently

supportting

furnishing support and encouragement

supporting

separating

the false belief that an inability to do

such

is abnormal and by chance widening the gap between the wealthy and the poor. In conclusion,

although

some people may argue that multilingual learning do harm to children, I am strongly convinced that stimulating children to discover other languages advance them in many ways. Hopefully, the educational system can be soon completed so that children will no longer endure with tension.