The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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mortality and mortality rates in New Zealand since 1901 and gives

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till the year 2101.

Overall

, in the period of time from the year 1901, both rates

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experienced a dramatic increase.

Moreover

, the death percentage probably overtake the birth

rate

in around 2041 and the large gap between the two levels will be reserved in the later part of

this

century.

Initially

, in 1901, the birth

rate

has been just over 20000. Over the period, it showed a steady increase and reached a peak of around 66000 after 60 years, in 1962. Since

then

the

rate

has fluctuated between 50000 and 60000 and it is expected to drop gradually to around 45000 births by the year 2101.

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to the changes with lots of fluctuations

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birth

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rate

, the death

rate

stood at around 10000 at the start of

this

period and showed an increase without any fall since

then

.

This

rate

is

also

expected to keep increasing significantly between 2021 and 2051 when the

rate

will probably level off at approximately 60000, before declining slightly in 2101.