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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

#rubbish #governments #amount
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These days, almost
countries
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all countries
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 produce
the
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a
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big
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large
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 amount of
garbage
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 every year, which
is
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apply
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detrimentally
affect
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affects
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 the environment the main reason for
this
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 situation is behavioral
people
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,
therefore
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governments
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 have to find some solution to solve
this
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 problem. In modern life,
people
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 produce more and more rubbish because they consume more
product
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products
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rather
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apply
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than
the
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in the
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 past. They
use
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 more practice
products
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 like
can
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cans
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, bottles and
packages
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packaged
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things
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 and they are thrown anywhere.Most
of
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apply
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the
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apply
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people
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 are not aware
about
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apply
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of
this
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 situation.
Moreover
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, wasting
also
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 contributes to
create
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creating
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garbage
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for example
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people
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 buy many foods but they cannot
use
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 all the foods or they remove something they are using to buy some new
things
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 they like. The
main
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apply
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second reason is
change
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a change
the change
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 in
people
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’s thinking because they are not aware
about
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of
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this
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 environmental issue. They
use
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 more
use
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 and through
things
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 like water boltless, practice bags and other
things
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. There are some solutions
governments
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 should do to reduce the amount of
garbage
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.
Firstly
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,
governments
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 need to raise awareness of rubbish in the general public. Children should be educated about
environment
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the environment
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 and adults need to know how to consume
products
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 efficiently and impose
the
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apply
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fine
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fines
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to
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on
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 those
people
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.
Who
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Those who
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are
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do
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 not
follows
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follow
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the rules and regulations
also
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governments
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 should encourage citizens to
use
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 recycled
products
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 to protect
environment
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the environment
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. The other reason
sweeper
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sweepers
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are
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do
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 not
fullyfill
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fulfil
fully fill
 our duties properly they cannot pick
the
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up the
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garbage
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on
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from
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 time to time in
garbage
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 places. In conclusion, the amount of rubbish is
problem
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a problem
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governments
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 are considering
to ban
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banning
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the
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apply
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plastic
products
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 and if everyone realizes some solutions,
then
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problem
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the problem
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would
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will
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 be solved.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • disposable culture
  • over-packaging
  • non-recyclable
  • public awareness
  • waste management
  • environmental impact
  • recycle
  • recycling facilities
  • waste separation
  • single-use products
  • infrastructure
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