In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think this is a good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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in consideration of its benefits for the state, while others say that the authorities ought to enforce some limits on the salaries. Professional growth and institutional efficacy are the main points which support

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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