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Some people think the newspaper is the most effective way to obtain the latest information because it has more influence than other forms of media. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is felt that, the best method to be informed
by
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of
with
 the latest news is
newspaper
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a newspaper
the newspaper
 while
media
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the media
 and
internet
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the internet
 are not likely to be
effective way
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an effective way
. I completely, disagree with
this
 notion and think that, technologies are always dominant in
such
 kind of needs of people.
Firstly
, many do not have time to go to purchase
newspaper
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a newspaper
newspapers
 or magazines due to their work, study or home
appliancies
a device or control that is very useful for a particular job
appliances
appliance
. To clarify, housewives are responsible for caring their children and feeding them with delicious foods. In
this
 case, they mostly prefer to obtain latest information about the globe from watching TV because there are many programmes which are available to show latest news with situations.
Secondly
, there are some people who live far off destination from shops or market stores and they could not approach to shops by their foot, after which these individuals decide to go by car.
As a result
, they kill their valuable time and they spend extra fuel or gas to buy
newspaper
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a newspaper
the newspaper
newspapers
.
Therefore
, in
this
 situation, people can get news from their mobile phones or television
instead
 of expanding time and money.
Last
 but not least, almost 90% of elderly people are could not see
clearly whereas
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clearly, whereas
 they have various illnesses regarding with their poor eye
site
an instance of visual perception
sight
. It has not professors or doctors who can find medical-care that can be
effectable
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effective
effectual
 for elderly to see clearly without glasses. Generally, they are more likely to buy
glass
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glasses
 in order to read
newspaper
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newspapers
the newspaper
 or magazines.
Hence
, elderly people should obtain all kinds of news from TV with big screen they can watch and to be informed with the latest information. In my conclusion, in
this
 modernized technology century, there is not
approachable balance
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an approachable balance
 between the
newspaper
 and tech-based machines. As I mentioned above, it is obvious that mobile
phones television
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phones, television
are
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is
 more beneficial for all people to receive news than that of
newspaper
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newspapers
.
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