Many people believe that it is important to always tell the truth. In your opinion, is it ever acceptable to tell a lie? Explain your answer giving reasons and specific examples.

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The diagrams illustrate Queen Mary Hospital at three different stages of its development: 1960,1980 and 2000. Overall, it is evident that the hospital increased its size over the period and

in addition

to a new nursing

school

, a cancer

centre

has been created and extended.

Hence

, the capacity of

car

parking has been reduced by a half. In 1960, the hospital was built close to the main road and near to the shopping

centre

Furthermore

, a large area behind the hospital was turned into a

car

park, while the backward area of the shopping

centre

was

farmland

Suggestion

farm land

. By 1980, the shopping

centre

was demolished to make a place in 2 different buildings, while one was used for the cancer

centre

and other as a pharmacy.

Moreover

, the hospital gains the farmland and converted it into nursing

school

. In 2000, the main building of hospital and pharmacy remain unchanged, but the cancer

centre

was extended to cover the entire nursing

school

. For

this

consequence, the original

car

park divided into two so that provides a small

car

park and narrow nursing

school

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

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181 words

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

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Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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