some people support the developments in agriculture such as factory farming and creations of new types of fruits and vegetables, while others oppose this view. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Now a days due to the increase in
technology even
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technology, even
the farming has modernised and became easy to grow the grains and
also
variety of fruits.On
this
new technique few people used to argue that it is better to grow fields with the new techniques
on the other
hand some
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hand, some
people used to
tell
express in words
say
that
ancients
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ancient
methods of growing fields is better than modern ones.Here in
this
issue I am going to put both the views and present my opinion on
this
. On one hand, holding up the Positive side of invention of new technologies in fielding is beneficial in places where the weather conditions
does not support
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do not support
fields to grow and
also
it is useful
at
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in
places where water content is less or unavailable for plants to grow.In
such
areas the new farming techniques are extremely useful.
For example
, areas like
andhra
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Andhra
pradesh
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Pradesh
where the rate of fields is very low and people use to buy vegetables and grains investing more cost.In recent year the average rate of grains that are produced in Andhra is 20
percent which
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percent, which
effects
have an effect upon
affects
the
people
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peoples'
person's
peoples
health
because of less yield. On the flip side, People in some areas where they grow
enormously large amount
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the enormously large amount
of yields every year and have sufficient raw materials to grow
them
people in general
they
do not need any new science technology to do farming.People believe that by consuming the
food
which has grown by using scientific techniques will affect their
health
and cause various diseases.
For example
, a recent report
in
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on
medical shows that 80 percent of people are becoming sick because of consuming
food
which is not grown naturally
.
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.
Their
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There
are
lot
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lots
of varieties
in
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of
rice
itself
the thing named or in question
it
such
as Steam rice made
of
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by
machines, plastic rice which looks similar to that of normal ones.If people
consuming
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consume
these kind of
food
they will obviously
fell
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fall
sick. In Conclusion, the new techniques of growing some
food
is
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are
really helpful in some areas and in some weather
conditions but
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conditions, but
it is always better to consume a naturally grown
food
which does not harm our
intestine
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intestinal
system as well as
health
.In my view I always believe consuming
health
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healthy
and fresh
food
grown by natural process.

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