Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for city. Other believe that money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Well, attractive building important for tourists purpose and play a crucial role in the life of
individual
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an individual
the individual
individuals
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it is not undeniable money consume to providing education to children and medical aid
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very important aspect. I agree both the mentioned points and
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give my opinion after discussing both
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views
in detail in the below mentioned paragraphs. In the city,
large impressive building
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the large, impressive building
the large impressive building
make
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makes
an attraction for tourists and
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the source of earning
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, people who live in
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the locality
, on weekends visit places with their family members where beautiful building are there and utilise their time and make fun while visiting that
buildings
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building
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it is not deniable that schools and hospitals are
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important
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, if schools are not there how children gain knowledge and excel in studies. Without gaining knowledge they do not do any kind of job and it leads to unemployment.
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, if government should invest money on schools, no one face any problem regarding seeking education.
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, medical aid
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important for people
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, human beings who are not able to pay for medical treatment so it thr the duty of local bodies opened charitable hospital where they can go and take medical aid In conclusion, both aspects are important for the survival without these we cannot imagine our life

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Architectural grandeur
  • Iconic edifices
  • Economic catalyst
  • Cultural landmark
  • Urban fabric
  • Sustainable development
  • Public services
  • Fiscal responsibility
  • Community well-being
  • Infrastructure investment
  • Urban planning
  • Holistic approach
  • Government stewardship
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