Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

There has always been huge arguments about the increasing number of car ownership. While some claim that it will cause lots of problems
such
as pollution and big
citys
a large and densely populated urban area; may include several independent administrative districts
cities
city
became big traffic jams, others do not find it very significant
problem
. In
this
essay I am going to mention about that problems an try to suggest an appropriate solution. From my point of view, the mentioned statement is true and it might be more
vital
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a vital problem
problem
for humanity in the near future.
For instance
, I have lived in Istanbul for 7 years and I clearly had a chance to experience
this
issue during that
years
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year
. The number of cars dramatically increased because of the rising population day by day. Our government
have not took
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has not taken
any pre-
causions
the child of your aunt or uncle
cousins
seasons
cushions
and now it can be said that İstanbul has turned into a big traffic jam.
In addition
, as I heard and see all
metropoles
a large and densely populated urban area; may include several independent administrative districts
metropolis
are trying to get over that
problem
.
However
, in developing countries
such
as Turkey,
although
everybody
complain
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complains
, nobody do something to solve that
problem
. Government should increase the awareness of the society because without individual supply it would be nearly
imposibble
not capable of occurring or being accomplished or dealt with
impossible
. There are a few considerable attempts in Europe,
for instance
, in
UK someone
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the UK someone
living in the centre of
city
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the city
should pay a tax to drive his car. That
encourage
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encourages
is encouraging
people to use more
puplic
not private; open to or concerning the people as a whole
public
transportation.
As a result
, it can be easily observed that
world
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the world
has been suffered by the rising number of cars. If governments and individuals do not take pre-
causions
a period of the year marked by special events or activities in some field
seasons
sessions
it will be worse. By the way, it is a
noticiable
capable or worthy of being perceived
noticeable
fact that, the usage of cars not only cause a traffic
problem but
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problem, but
also
cause significant other problems like
polution
undesirable state of the natural environment being contaminated with harmful substances as a consequence of human activities
pollution
,
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,
as well.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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